Severn Beach

by Derek Morrison

2nd Severn Crossing from Severn Beach
1. Second Severn Crossing viewed from Severn Beach village.
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Severn Beach has history

Once Blackpool of the West
Only ghostly echoes now remain
As commuters build their nest
Shirley’s Cafe near the shore
Mug of coffee from an urn
Silent juke-box in the corner
The turntable doesn’t turn
Giant slab of fruit cake
Adds to energy store
At value-for-money prices
That tempts you into more
Then visit near empty promenade
See Severn Bridges in the sky
Then listen to that whisper
Of past’s fast-fading cry.

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Version 2

…….
Severn Beach has history.
Once Blackpool of the West.
Only ghostly echoes now remain,
as commuters build their nest.
Shirley’s Cafe near the shore,
draws boiling water from an urn.
Silent jukebox in the corner.
The turntable doesn’t turn.
Stop at the bakery near the steps,
where the Blue Lagoon once lay.
Now just imagine the background,
of excited populous at play.
Visit the near empty promenade.
See Severn Bridges in the sky.
Then listen to the whisper,
of the past’s fast fading cry.

 

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Version 3

…….
Severn Beach has history.
Once Blackpool of the West.
Only ghostly echoes now remain,
as commuters build their nest.
Shirley’s Cafe near the shore,
draws boiling water from an urn.
Silent jukebox in the corner.
The turntable doesn’t turn.
Stop at the bakery near the steps,
where the Blue Lagoon once lay.
Imagine now the hubbub,
of excited populous at play.
Visit the near empty promenade.
See Severn Bridges in the sky.
Then listen to the whisper,
of the past’s fast fading cry.

 

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Severn Beach

by

Derek Morrison

 

 

 

 

 

Severn Beach village was one of the micro ‘beach’ resorts that sprung up in the early 20th century to provide accessible venues for the British working class to spend their holidays or weekends. A local railway station would boost such developments. Anticipating the extension of the railway from Avonmouth docks in 1924, what had once been no more than a farm on the muddy banks of the Severn Estuary was, in 1922, transformed into a ‘seaside’ resort complete with the Blue Lagoon swimming pool, boating lake, amusements, less restrictive alcohol licensing laws than nearby Bristol – oh – and a strip club. Some wit of the past, apparently with an inclination for hyperbole, dubbed it the Blackpool of the West.

The tone of this short multimedia work attempts to convey the pathos associated with a visit to a largely forgotten landscape and history.  It’s knowledge of this past which makes a visit to Severn Beach today so worthwhile. On  the surface, it’s just another village on the outskirts of Bristol but, yet, walk a few yards off its main street, and you are on the banks of the Severn Estuary where the echoes of that history still reverberate. Amplify those echoes and wallow in the ambience of Shirley’s Cafe which still provides the sort of unpretentious but good food that existed before quasi bistros and gastro-pubs. If you are more a take-away person then Down’s Bakery can provide the fuel for that walk along the Severn Path.

Severn Beach, pathos, yes. But perhaps also an oasis.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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New Toy

by Derek Morrison

DandyHorseDraisineSmallI have a new toy and it’s very very light
It’s made of carbon fibre, and its lines are tight
It has disc brakes and an electric gear
Much better than the one I bought last year.

It looks so good I don’t want to take it for a ride
Messing up its beauty with splashes from the side
But unless I get it out there and into public lights
I’ll miss my five minutes of fame, I’ll miss my bragging rights.

It will make me go so much faster of that I’m sure
For my declining performance this has go to be the cure
So I anticipate improvement, my purchase will enhance
For it’s the same one as ridden in the Tour de France.

It weighs half a kilo less than the one I bought before
But that is reflected in the price, it cost much much more
But viewed rationally it made no economic sense
With each gram of mass reduction equaling 100 pence.

The same sum applied to my losing each gram of weight
Each 100 pence saved, reflecting less food on my plate
Would mean there would be much more to enjoy
From an improved performance on a lesser toy.

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Deflation

by Derek Morrison

Fine time for a puncture
Fine time for a puncture
Attribution: Wesley Trevor Johnston [CC BY-SA-2.0]
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Gods, they smiled
As plans you told
Group cycle ride
Despite the cold.

Out in countryside
Rain like spear
Bad day for puncture
Mused he at rear.

The assassin thorn
Lay in silent wait
Its pointed dagger
Was someone’s fate.

Heavens pouring down
Prayers for release
Coffee stop pending
So pace increase.

The waiting assassin
Struck the blow
He at the rear
Didn’t even know.

Speed fell away
Group unaware
Pedaled onwards
Dry to share.

A slowing pace
Insufficient heat
Magnified loss
Once on feet.

Shelter priority
Fix can wait
Primary risk
Hypothermia state.

Leaden hands
Fingers blue.
Inn gave respite
Hot drinks too.

Repair was painful
Fix was slow
Fingers seized
Felt like toe.

Coffee stop
One was gone
Post rain and coffee
Search party spawn.

But happy ending
After transient fear
From my being
He at the rear.

Gods, they smile
As plans you tell
So plan for breakdown
In weather hell.

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